peer feedback and general comments on final illustrations

constructive criticism  to take on bored:-

• boarders are to dominant
• images look better on their own
• not that clear what the quote is.

honestly, after i had added the boarders to the illustrations, i was not 100% happy with the effect i got, felt the 'polaroid picture' idea to capture did not the memory was not very clear. i could potentially cut them down and just show the illustrations as suggested?

summed up information from peer crit :

• strenghts:
•  vast quantity of work-
• good step-by-step process progression on blog
•   final resolution are a strong and  communicative
•  suggestions: 
•  simplify blog
•  it would be interesting to see you push out more from your comfort zone and do something crazy.