peer feedback sheets

First peer feedback sheet.

What suggesting can you make about the visual concepts presented in response to the selected quotes?

Strengths

varied responses, some good strong ideas, I really like the child bride concept and the face getting progressively older concept.

Suggestions 

will be really good to see you expand the chalkboard idea and may be looking to touch is since they're pretty permanent. 

What suggestions can you make about the choice/consideration of specific format in relation to the visual concept?

strengths

you consider framing some of your work and different possibilities such as landscape import trades and it suits the work.

Suggestions

the landscape format works well more I think because it's a linear format which sees the whole 'lifespan' idea.

What suggestions can you make about the choice news media in relation to the effective generation of ideas?

Strengths

I really like the line drawing of the washing line with photo's on, and the pencil drawings. 

suggestions

carries anything because there just concepts – fine line could work well.

Additional comments and  suggested and  contextual references illustrators,websites, books ETc.

 looking to hope down laugh he His memories really well they look like photographs and sense of angle and layout.

Second peer review sheet.

 what suggestions can you make what the visual concepts presented in response to the selected quote?

Strengths

 you have a wide range of good ideas,  I realised that the veg one – it communicates messy well in the humorous way.

 suggestions 

 if you could take this  further and I think it can be quite humorous if you wanted it to be.

– Maybe have them being drawn on the permanent marker rather than a pencil?

  what suggestions can you make about the choice and/or consideration of  specific format in relation to the visual concepts?

 strengths

 you have started to consider framing farm in your ideas right from the start, and it's clear you thought about composition. – Really like the chalkboard idea and the photo washing line idea.

Suggestions

 could always cut out the shapes of the deformed vegetables as a format ?  This could emphasise the permanent  and weird shape.

What suggestions can you make about the choice  And use of media in relation to the effect generation ideas? 

  strengths

pencil/ Rough lines  worked really well at communicating – trying to play safe- not make mistakes in life.

 suggestions

 you could also try working with bold/ permanent looking tools/materials to help communicate the message

 I'm really happy  with the thorough,  Thought out and honest response I got of my peers. 

I will aim to take on most of the feedback.

They have really made me think of new ideas, and how to develop previous ones. I really like the idea  suggested of looking at  tattoos,  i think this is a really interesting concept  and will develop on this.