Presenting ideas to small group

After showing and talking through my 5 favourite illustrations to the group I asked their opinions on which ones they thought were most effective and what they think needs improving.

The group agreed that they like the panda illustration however they felt that they didn't necessarily know that the illustration was about China. To over come this we discussed protential medias I could use. I thought one way to overcome This would be to use old chinese newspapers/images and to fill in the black sections of the panda with the images. I will experiment with this idea. 

I also shared my worry that my ideas didn't sum up as a whole my parters personality as I have just focused on 2 answers. However after we re-read the brief, we saw that it asks for us to 'produce illustrated initials based on their responses' which is something I have done. However though this is what I have done I won't to try and include some more answers/illustrations to make My piece more personal to my partner.