i asked my peers if their was anything they felt i could improve with my design idea, mentioning how it is aimed at the younger demographic and how had intial ideas of showing a person either using their phone, listening to music -just being oblivious/ignorant to what is going on around them or happening in the real world.

robyn (fashion communication student) suggested adding earphones to the main figure with the blindfold.

though i have already drawn her without, i think it is still worth trying to work into/on top of the drawing earphones as it will strengthen my concept.

however, as not to distract, or over complicate the rest of the design, i want to make the addition of the earphones fairly subtle but recognisable.