i really like the subtly of this layout, i think if i make more motifs that would fit into this layout it would work.

like my last development when i added colour, i think i wil add it to odd motifs in this layout- i think it will add a lighthearted and more postiive feeling whilst bringing the price to life and drawing attention to certain motifs (parts of persons life) 

one problem i was thinking about with this idea was how it would work with the couple i am illustrating - merging the motifs together to symbolise their memories and life together like this could work?