- is what we have come up with suitable for our audience ?
- does the evidence on the boards meet the brief?
- is the concept strong enough?
- which idea is the strongest?
- how could we improve?
- is the visual direction appropriate to the tone?
- is the media appropriate?
- do my ideas show the mandatory requirements of the brief?
- does my proposal communicate the appropriate concept?
- can you understand the brief through the boards?
what i need to do:
add product information -health values
improve illustration by making sure the scenes are separate, yet still hold a comical feel.
colours could communicate health instead of having to physically write it
NEXT PEER REVIEW SESSION:pretty much put to bed! - the boards (3-5) professionally finished, responded to feedback - taking what i have got and extending it further (applying the improvements and advise)
discussed as group:
- more final resolved work -
- specific idea rather than a number so you focus on improving just one
- look and experiment with a more professional/thought out layout
- the board should be able to to inform someone of exactly what your doing, why and the brief without having to talk to you. (clarity)
- spelling and grammer checking
- earlier preparation - dont leave it to the day to print it out!
- more justification of media and colours etc
- actual production
expectations (discussed as class):
- more resolved visual concepts
- more appropriate/considered visual aesthetics
- more professional/clearer/clarified presentation board
- clear timescale and deadlines
- refined brief
- production
dont show development of ideas or contextual reference when making proposals to show to actual clients
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