though i have tried to make my concept strong, i think i have thought to much about it, perhaps over complicating/over working it so the idea is obvious which has maybe taken the fun/interest from it. 

not helping my enthusiasm about this idea, i also I'm not happy with the illustrative technique i have used, i don't think it is aesthetically pleasing and doesn't communicate the amount of time i actually spend making it - Annoying! 

to maintain interest, i aim to develop my concept by simplifying it down - , simple, effective, rememberable!