Submission Tutorial Notes and Time table for this Point forward

Submission Tutorial notes: (all briefs) 

i need to present clearly the final resolutions of each brief i undertook as this is not clear - make sure the presentation on each is consistant

• briefs 2,6,7 are concept driven, play to strengths of my practice 
• briefs 3,4,5 don't reflect whats coming through conceptually and practically in terms of the process i have used in other briefs that demonstrate my practice. 

need to state in evaluation and presentation that these briefs were very much client driven, with specific processes demanded - therefore the high level of critical engagement was not as obvious, or the focus in the development of process of these briefs. 

Big Kahoona feedback: 

if i am thinking about it in terms of an exhibition piece - i need to think about the quantity of the pieces i am proposing - (i would have space for 10-12 drawings/ more than just one wall to fill) 

quantity needs to drive this project not how i am going to lay it out.

potentially got 6 people that i could communicate their stories

problem with work at the moment - i'm trying to cram all the information and the person into one illustration/portrait.

i need to create a number of images that will allow me to tell the story.

not cram the story into a number of images. 

think about it in terms of how many pages in a book you would beed to tell the story. 

portrait print of each person - then could have 4 or 5 more to tell their story.  

as a exhibition piece, you want to walk in and find out that this is john, this is hazel etc an introductory piece about then, then you'd have all these other things about them, their stories. as clear as you can be. 

with all this in mind, i have decided to made a time time of the weeks i have left until the deadline which will help me resolve and complete all of the above.